Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Peer Critique

Robin Piach
Professor Sony Coráñez Bolton
ENGL 121
31 March 2015
Peer Critique
Ms. Clotter’s wrote her summary on “Imagined Communities” by Benedict Anderson.  The opening sentence to her summary is “Many things we would thought we knew how to define because it is a term we learned in 6th grade. But how well can we know that term?”  I found this opening to be a bit confusing, because the term itself is not stated.   Further on in the paper Ms. Clotter refers to the term “nationalism” several times; from this I can assume that the term she is referring to in paragraph one is “nationalism”.   I feel if the topic was more clearly stated at the beginning of the paper, and clearly stating what the author’s argument is, the reader will have an easier time understanding Ms. Clotter’s summary of Anderson’s “Imagined Communities”, and her interpretation of the book, and the point that Anderson is trying to make.
Ms. Clotter does a nice job of breaking up and directing the flow of her summary by using the names of the section titles “section Concepts and Definition page six” (¶ 3).  The summary itself touches on various aspects as to what nationalism can be, and what nationalism is made up of.  
I believe that Ms. Clotter has a good general understanding of the book “Imagined Communities” by Benedict Anderson. Her summary has some nice transitions for example at the end of paragraph five she states “However, we had no choice to chose what we could be born into. That leads to the religion segment.”. This transition finishes the idea that the current section is referring to and introduces that the next section will pertain to religion and how it is related to the makeup of nationalism.
Ms. Clotter’s essay had a good overall feel to it. The essay needs a more pronounced statement of the argument that Anderson is trying to make. I understand that this is a rough draft, however there were a fair amount of grammatical, spelling and word choice errors that made the essay a bit difficult to read and fully understand.  Some examples of this are as follows: In paragraph three “is that background Of being Hispanic, African American, Coregation, ect.”  I am unsure what she means by “Coregation”. Also, the O in “Of” should be lowercase, along with the O in “Of” in the title of her essay.  One other sentence I had a hard time understanding was in paragraph one “If I asked you to tell men hat nationalism means can you tell me off the back of your head what does it actually mean?”, I am confused by the wording of this statement in general, but I feel that concept of the statement is essential to the summary itself.
I am interested in reading Ms. Clotter’s final draft of her summary, along with the application portion of this project. 

Monday, March 30, 2015

Application


Robin Piach
Professor Sony Coráñez Bolton
ENGL 121
31 March 2015
Application

St. Serge and St. Bacchus
In his article “Capitalism and Gay Identity” John D’Emilio argues that “gay men and lesbians have not always existed.  Instead, they are a product of history, and have come into existence in a specific historical era.  Their emergence is associated with the relation of capitalism; it has been the historical development of capitalism - more specifically, its free labor system - that has allowed large numbers of men and women in the late twentieth century to call themselves gay, to see themselves as part of a community of similar men and women, and to organize politically on the basis of that identity.” (p. 468)  I find this statement challenging because later in his article D’Emilio states there is “Evidence from colonial New England court records and church sermons indicate that male and female homosexual behavior existed in the seventeenth century.” (p. 470) So, D’Emilio himself shows proof that homosexual relations have existed in history.   

Achilles tending Patroclus’ wounds from a red-figure kylix by Sosias Painter from about 500 B.C. in the Staatliche museum in Berlin, Gill, About.com

              Homosexuality can be found thought out history as far back as 3000 B.C. Mesopotamia. Homosexuality can be found in art, poetry, and legal documents in China in the Han Dynasty. “The largest amount of material pertinent to the history of homosexuality is from Greece, from notable philosophers and writers such as Plato, Xenophon, Plutarch, and pseudo-Lucian, to plays by Aristophanes, to Greek artwork and vases. James B. De Young notes that homosexuality seems to have existed more widely among the ancient Greeks more than among any other ancient culture.” (www.conservapedia.com)
               D’Emilio argues that there is no history for gay men and lesbians, but this is false when you talk about homosexuality as behavior. It is true when you speak of it as unified homosexual identity.  D’Emilio states that  “Homosexual behavior, however, is different from homosexual identity. There was, quite simply, no “social space” in the colonial system of production that allowed men and women to be gay. Survival was structured around participation in a nuclear family.” (p. 470) 
The argument can be made that capitalism has made possible the formation of current and expanding gay identity and community on a more worldly scale and has made it a culture of its own.  People from all walks of life and areas of the globe now have a universal name to put to their feelings, and this gives them a sense of community. I believe D’Emilio should amend his argument to state “Defined homosexual identity of gay men and lesbians has not always existed but it is rather a product of social freedoms granted by the historical development of capitalism, industrialism, and the free labor system.”  A statement such as this would be a clearer statement to prove his overall argument of this article.  

Everybody’s Gay, Queer Scifi


The current LGBT movement, (formally known as the gay rights movement) is very strong in the United States and has expanded worldwide.  There are distinct lines of division between LGBT supporters and the opposition on current issues facing the LGBT community as a whole. Today the LGBT community and allies continue to fight for acceptance and equality, especially when it comes to the aspect of marriage and family life. This is different then D’Emilio’s statements on devolution of the family structure, and the creation of an “affectional community” (p. 475)
             One major current issue facing the LGBT community is the right for same-sex couples to be legally married. Currently thirty-seven states in the U.S. have legalized same-sex marriage, while thirteen states still ban same-sex marriage (www.procon.org) By being married or in an long term, they are creating a family unit. Not all but some same-sex couples have chosen to expand the family to include children. Those couples have options to create this either through in vitro fertilization, surrogacy, or adoption. In my opinion the family unit of Neil Patrick Harris and David Burtka is one of the most beautiful and genuine families in today’s Hollywood. They are strong advocates for the LGBT movement and family equality.  They appear to be wonderful and loving parents. "The couple announced in August 2010 that they were expecting twins via a surrogate mother. Harris and Burtka became parents on October 12, 2010, with the arrival of son Gideon Scott and daughter Harper Grace." (www.biography.com) Burka and Harris are both the biological fathers of the twins, with one fertilizing an egg each to be implanted into surrogate.  Harris and Burtka were married on September 6, 2014 in Italy. 

The Butrka-Harris Family, Disney Ride, Sharpshooter Images / Splash News

The Butrka-Harris Family, Halloween 2013, Lauren Yapalater, Buzzfeed.com

The show "Modern Family" follows the live of Jay Pritchett and his family. Pritchett's family includes his much younger second wife, his stepson, and infant son, as well has his two adult children and their spouses and children. This a very strong visualization of how the family unit in the United States has changed.
ABC's Sitcom "Modern Family" Family Tree

           A major current opposition to the LGBT civil rights moment is the signing of legislation in Indiana Governor Mike Pence (R) “that could legalize discrimination against lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender individuals. The Religious Freedom Restoration Act would allow any individual or corporation to cite its religious beliefs as a defense when sued by a private party. But many opponents of the bill, which included business leaders, argued that it could open the door to widespread discrimination. Business owners who don't want to serve same-sex couples, for example, could now have legal protections to discriminate.” (Terkel, www.huffingtonpost.com)

“I signed SEA 101 today to ensure religious liberty is fully protected under IN law” Huffington Post via Twitter @GovePenceIN
History is always being written. What happens today becomes the building blocks of tomorrow, and the historical references of yesterday.  If we do not learn from the past, we are doomed to repeat it. While there was not a recognizable identity, and sense of community in regards to homosexuals throughout history, there was definitely a recognizable presence. 



Citation
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Boswell, John, "St. Serge and St. Bacchus "Same-Sex Unions in Premodern Europe. WEB 29 March 2015
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D'Emilio, John. "Capitalism and Gay Identity". The Lesbian and Gay Studies Reader. Ed. Abelove, Henry. Barale, Michele. Halperin, David. New York, NY: Routledge, 1993. Pages 467-476.  Print.
Gill, N.S., "Greek Mythology", About.com, Sosias Painter, “Achilles tending Patroclus”, 500 B.C., Staatliche museum, Berlin. Web. 29 April 2015
ProCon.org. "37 States with Legal Gay Marriage and 13 States with Same-Sex Marriage Bans” ProCon.org. 4 Mar. 2015. Web. 1 Apr. 2015.
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Summary

Robin Piach
Professor Sony Coráñez Bolton
ENGL 121
31 March 2015

Summary

In his article “Capitalism and Gay Identity” History and Women’s and Gender Studies Professor John D’Emilio challenges what he refers to as the myth of the ‘eternal homosexual.’ He expresses his stance against the idea that “gay men and lesbians always were and always will be. We are everywhere; not just now, but throughout history, in all societies and all periods.” (p. 468)  He feels that expression of this idea and lack of gay history will be a hindrance to the future of political stance and the gay rights movement. 

In this July 4, 1967 file photo Kay Tobin Lahusen, right, and other demonstrators carry signs calling for protection of homosexuals from discrimination as they march in a picket line in front of Independence Hall in Philadelphia. (The Associate Press)

D’Emilio proposes this challenge because he fears momentum from the 1970s successful political achievements will not carry into the future because there is not an “accurate theory of gay history” he infers “must be part of this political enterprise...to fashion our goals and strategy.” (p. 468).  Which suggests without knowing one's history, how can provisions be made to insure a proper future? “These myths have limited our political perspective.” (p. 468)

Aslett, John 18th Century Drawing 

D’Emilio argues that the identity of gay men and lesbians are a product of history through the development of capitalism, the free labor system and the independent freedom it offers.  He supports this idea by comparing the early seventeenth century Colonial American patriarchal lead communal family system; in which family members were very interdependent on each other for survival, and sex was for procreation purposes because creating a large family work force was “as necessary for survival as producing grain.” (p. 469) to the twentieth century family structure or lack thereof. The family structure of the twentieth century was not driven by in-family production of goods to survive, but had become a setting for nurturing relationships and a personal life. “Capitalism weakens the bonds that once kept families together that their members and experienced a growing instability in the place they have come to expect happiness and emotional security.” (p. 473)

Shore Leave
World War II was a pivotal point in the development of the gay identity and community. D’Emilio stated that “The war severely disrupted traditional patterns of gender relations and sexuality, and temporarily created a new erotic situation conducive to homosexual expression...Others could become gay because of the temporary freedom to explore sexuality that the war provided.” (p. 471 - 472) D’Emilio suggest in this passage that being gay is a choice.  This statement especially coming from a gay man's perspective, I find this a bit of a shock.  The thought process behind this may just be a generational or in line with the time period this article was written in.

Gay, August 17, 1970,   page 15 
D’Emilio argues that capitalism has changed the historical family structure, created independence giving people the ability to have personal and social lives, “has led to the separation of sexuality from procreation.” (p. 474) Capitalism has made it possible for gay men and lesbians to exist, and to build an “affectional community” (p. 475), and liberate for civil freedoms. I do agree with these statements from the author.  Independence and a sense of community are key factors in self-discovery.  The self-discovery of individuals, community formation of like-minded individuals, and freedom of expression are the fundamental cornerstones of the Gay Rights movement. In his article D'Emilo does put a strong emphasis on the family structure and how the dynamics of that structure changed over time from the result of an expanding capitalist society; it would have been nice to have him expand on this thought and expand it into gay men and lesbians having their own family structure. This may not have been as relevant to the part of the development of gay identity during the course of historical growth of the movement expressed out by the author, as it is during the current time segment of the LGBT movement.  
I do feel that D'Emilio is spot on with his general assessment of  capitalism and gay identity. As a capitalistic society expanded so did the availability of independence for personal self-discovery of identity, sexuality, and social experiences.  Identity and social experiences where men and women who recognized their attraction for members of their own sex were able to break apart from norm and commune with other like-minded individuals.  Some areas where homosexuals were able to meet and interact were bars, public bathhouses, social clubs, literary societies and professional associations.  The bonds of identity and community formed at these times made it possible for the gay liberation and women's liberation movements of the late 1960s and 1970s to be so successful.
While D'Emilio's argument of the relationship between capitalism and formation of the gay identity is crucial point of the article, for my application I would like to expand more on the history of the gay man and lesbian that D'Emilio states didn't exist so until capitalism can the free labor movement started to progress. 

Citation

Aslett, John 18th Century Drawing. Web 29 March 2015

D'Emilio, John. "Capitalism and Gay Identity". The Lesbian and Gay Studies Reader. Ed. Abelove, Henry. Barale, Michele. Halperin, David. New York, NY: Routledge, 1993. Pages 467-476. Print.

Gay, August 17, 1970, page 15. Web, 29 March 2015

Glover, Tom. "Shore Leave". Web 29 March 2015

The Associated Press, Web. 29 March 2015